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hello [Feb. 21st, 2005|12:24 am]
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hello everyone ,I am new here, I am 14 years old, I am French, then sorry for my pitiful English
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From: nitpickerforyou
2005-09-17 04:44 pm (UTC)

Your English isn't terrible, it's the grammar that needs work.

Your English isn't terrible. There are just a few grammatical errors.

"
hello everyone ,I am new here, I am 14 years old, I am French, then sorry for my pitiful English"

To

Hello everyone, I am new here. I am French, as well as 14. Please excuse my poor writing as my English isn't well.

I changed things, but that's essentially it. All you really should remember is to use the spell check and that you need to capitalize the beginning of each sentence and place a period at the end. Also you should watch your comma usage.
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